Unwelcome News pg. 1

its absolutely beautiful! the lines are very clean and the writing is very clear. I love how its black and white except for the eyes. I would have liked to know a little more about what was going on, but thats just something that was lacking in the description, not the page. I definatley want to read more, which means that you are doing the whole "comic thing" right! its only the first page and i feel sorry for the characters. The technique not only get a high rating from me but the content of the comic will as well.